I love how you've woven winter into your haiku. The animals are still half-alive from starvation and freezing, and yet they know to reach for dreams of warm, bountiful spring, summer, and full. So you really aren't foolish at all! Love the feeling and wisdom. Love, Margaret
i love this wintry lament.
ReplyDeleteperfect haiku full of pondering and longing.
so glad you are here
tossing haiku at every
phase of the moon, whew!
I love how you've woven winter into your haiku. The animals are still half-alive from starvation and freezing, and yet they know to reach for dreams of warm, bountiful spring, summer, and full. So you really aren't foolish at all! Love the feeling and wisdom. Love, Margaret
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ReplyDeletewell done.
:)